Everest

Original content: "The lack of proper planning and communication resulted in a delay in the project. This caused frustration among team members and ultimately led to a decrease in productivity. As a result, the project was not completed on time and incurred additional costs. In the future, it is essential to prioritize planning and ensure clear communication to prevent similar issues from occurring."

Revised content: A delay in the project was caused by the absence of adequate planning and communication. This, in turn, led to frustration among team members and a subsequent decrease in productivity. Consequently, the project was not completed on schedule, resulting in unexpected additional costs. To avoid the recurrence of such issues in the future, it is imperative to prioritize thorough planning and maintain clear communication.

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